The Art of Writing Dialogue
One of the sub-arts of fiction writing is dialogue.
The art of dialogue is often confused with the art of character (what happens between the quotations).
I mean, specifically, how as an author you artfully frame the dialogue.
A few examples:
- Naked: “Let’s go to the movies.” “Yes.”
- Saidism: “Let’s go to the movies,” he said. “Yes,” she said.
- Adjectival comments: “Let’s go to the movies,” he offered. “Yes,” she sighed.
- Tom Swifties: “Let’s go to to the movies,” he said insightfully. “Yes,” she said affirmatively.
- Action tags: Tom stopped walking and turned to her. “Let’s go to the movies.” She almost bumped into him out of surprise. “Yes.”
- Body language: Tom’s hands trembled. “Let’s go to the movies.” Marie looked down, pulled her hair back behind her ear, and looked up. “Yes.”
- Microexpressions: A smile pulled at Tom’s lips. “Let’s go to the movies.” Marie raised her eyebrows. “Yes.”
- Eyes: Tom couldn’t stop blinking. “Let’s go to the movies.” Marie’s eyes widened. “Yes.”
I like action tags and body language.
Some people like saidism, or plain naked dialogue.
There’s no right answer. That’s what makes it art.